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21.4.10

Confessions of a drunk poet

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just to prove u wrong
when drunk i can still rhyme a song

tequila may burn my throat
but it is rhyme in my blood that floats

my eyes may droop in bliss
in woes i can still find my bliss

you may not like the taste of beer
trust me when drunk it is not that queer

red wine over good food is awesome
ah crap am drunk wholesome

5 comments:

  1. The very indication that you are tipsy if not drunk is the lack of punctuation!

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  2. @Nikita - On the top right hand side, I have written:

    second line rhymes to the first
    carrying silly or profound bursts

    rhyming rimes and that is it
    punctuations can go for a hit

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  3. Give me some red wine, give me some rum... give me another ounce .... i wanna throw up once again :P

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  4. @ koni - LOL..tht was awesome! :D

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  5. haha..last line said it all....buddy take care ya..

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